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Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Write on Wednesdays: One Liner

Write On Wednesdays


This is my third week with Write on Wednesdays. Today is about a great one liner that describes a part of my day. Click the button above to read the full prompt. Here is my line:


And as we lay together, listening to the rhythmic drumming of his heart, fingers laced and legs intertwined, I knew I had found my treasure.


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Posted by Kerry at 12:16 AM
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20 comments:

  1. Stella OrbitSeptember 7, 2011 at 12:41 AM

    There is so much in that sentence! Great post for Write on Wednesday!

    Can't wait for the next part.

    :)

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  2. MegSeptember 7, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    What a great starting line... what happens next???? ;)

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  3. Melinda ChapmanSeptember 7, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    Beautiful, Kerry! By these words I'm sure you indeed have found your treasure. :)

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  4. Ramblings of an Honest HeartSeptember 7, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    The love pouring out of this sentence is amazing.

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  5. KerrySeptember 7, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    Thank you everyone! It describes a part of my day yesterday perfectly, and nearly every day. I feel this way always, and that I am truly blessed and the luckiest girl in the world to finally have found someone so amazing. Sometimes it is just unbelievable. =)

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  6. Daniel KissingerSeptember 7, 2011 at 2:37 PM

    :-) Hehe i love it. You are amazing :-*

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  7. JaimeeSeptember 7, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    What a beautiful expression of love! Just lovely!

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  8. DomesblissitySeptember 7, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    Oh, that's beautiful Kerry. What a beautiful moment.

    Anne xx

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  9. Daniel MeyerSeptember 7, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    Kerry is this the opening to the Kama Sutra? lol Great spicy one liner! BTW, I added you as well to my "Blogs I Follow" :-)

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  10. KerrySeptember 7, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    Thanks everyone!

    @Daniel M - It actually wasn't meant to be spicy at all, LOL. But I can see how it could be. Thanks for the add!

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  11. EloiseSeptember 7, 2011 at 7:09 PM

    I remember those moments :) Now that I have 4 kids - those morning moments are few and far between! Great work xx

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  12. JayneSeptember 7, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    Aww this is so lovely-I hope I can write something similar one day (other than from my imagination lol) :)

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  13. Jodie AnstedSeptember 7, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    Oh, I love this Kerry. Sounds like my kinda story! Gorgeous.

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  14. JanelleSeptember 8, 2011 at 12:51 AM

    Beautiful! I know that feeling, it's wonderful. Like a perfect moment in time, when you'd like to push the "pause" button and just be. Well done!

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  15. SannahSeptember 8, 2011 at 2:36 AM

    beautiful line, beautiful imagery. as janelle says above, a perfect moment in time.

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  16. KerrySeptember 8, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    Thank you all for your wonderful comments! Much appreciated.

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  17. StephanieSeptember 8, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    Sweet words and fantastic imagery! Well done!! :)

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  18. LeneSeptember 8, 2011 at 9:03 PM

    This is just beautiful. Such a gorgeous moment and you have captured it perfectly. Well done!

    By the way, I've just nominated you for a 'Versatile Blogger award' pop over to check it out! xx

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  19. JaySeptember 8, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Such a lovely image captured with your words.

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  20. InkPaperPenSeptember 10, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    I liked it. Simple but sums up the moment! Pleased to see you back for yet another week

    x

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