Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Write on Wednesdays: One Liner

Write On Wednesdays


This is my third week with Write on Wednesdays. Today is about a great one liner that describes a part of my day. Click the button above to read the full prompt. Here is my line:


And as we lay together, listening to the rhythmic drumming of his heart, fingers laced and legs intertwined, I knew I had found my treasure.


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20 comments:

  1. There is so much in that sentence! Great post for Write on Wednesday!

    Can't wait for the next part.

    :)

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  2. What a great starting line... what happens next???? ;)

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  3. Beautiful, Kerry! By these words I'm sure you indeed have found your treasure. :)

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  4. The love pouring out of this sentence is amazing.

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  5. Thank you everyone! It describes a part of my day yesterday perfectly, and nearly every day. I feel this way always, and that I am truly blessed and the luckiest girl in the world to finally have found someone so amazing. Sometimes it is just unbelievable. =)

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  6. :-) Hehe i love it. You are amazing :-*

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  7. What a beautiful expression of love! Just lovely!

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  8. Oh, that's beautiful Kerry. What a beautiful moment.

    Anne xx

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  9. Kerry is this the opening to the Kama Sutra? lol Great spicy one liner! BTW, I added you as well to my "Blogs I Follow" :-)

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  10. Thanks everyone!

    @Daniel M - It actually wasn't meant to be spicy at all, LOL. But I can see how it could be. Thanks for the add!

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  11. I remember those moments :) Now that I have 4 kids - those morning moments are few and far between! Great work xx

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  12. Aww this is so lovely-I hope I can write something similar one day (other than from my imagination lol) :)

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  13. Oh, I love this Kerry. Sounds like my kinda story! Gorgeous.

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  14. Beautiful! I know that feeling, it's wonderful. Like a perfect moment in time, when you'd like to push the "pause" button and just be. Well done!

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  15. beautiful line, beautiful imagery. as janelle says above, a perfect moment in time.

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  16. Thank you all for your wonderful comments! Much appreciated.

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  17. Sweet words and fantastic imagery! Well done!! :)

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  18. This is just beautiful. Such a gorgeous moment and you have captured it perfectly. Well done!

    By the way, I've just nominated you for a 'Versatile Blogger award' pop over to check it out! xx

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  19. Such a lovely image captured with your words.

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  20. I liked it. Simple but sums up the moment! Pleased to see you back for yet another week

    x

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